I am a Year 5 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Miss Morrison.
Hi soane it is great but you should've add some picture but it is great keep it up.
Hi soane,Like the way how you used the bullet point's next time add more photo's to your work to make it look a bit better but keep up the good work.
Hi SoaneI like the way you used heaps of fun facts but just remember to add more photos but keep up the good work